Wednesday, December 16, 2009
Tuesday, December 15, 2009
My Photographic Memory!♥
Saturday, December 5, 2009
Mini Commentary!♥
What is Murakami trying to achieve with his use of language in this passage?
Friday, December 4, 2009
Wednesday, December 2, 2009
Tuesday, November 24, 2009
My Strengths and Weaknesses!♥
So far, I have written two essays in my tenth grade English class. The first one was an in-class short story literary essay and the second one was related to the themes of Antigone. In both essays I had my strengths and weaknesses, which I can hopefully improve on by the end of the school year.
Strengths: Usually when I write about a topic that interests me and that I am passionate about, I can write more and connect more with it, which, overall, makes my writing better. Overtime, I've become better at including examples in my essay to help with the reader's understanding. I feel like this has become one of my strengths. I am also quite good at coming up with lots of ideas (but that can sometimes be a problem) and I can develop them pretty well! When it comes to grammar, spelling, and punctuation, I usually do well and have no problems! Just need to pay attention to my weaknesses!
Weaknesses: One problem I've always had with my essays is including advanced and difficult vocabulary. I always use simple words and don't usually have a variety. This is one of my major weaknesses, which I really have to work on. Another significant weakness is that I'm not always able to develop my ideas in an organized and coherent way and keep one idea per paragraph. I tend to include information that sometimes doesn't relate to the topic sentence or thoughts being conveyed in the paragraph. Lastly, I do not always go into depth with my arguments and information. I think that if I really focus on those weaknesses I can definitely improve by the end of the year, and in the future, as I write more and more essays and work on different types of formal writing.
Monday, November 9, 2009
Xtranormal Reflection! ♥
Friday, November 6, 2009
Thursday, October 22, 2009
Heracles and Athena! ♥
http://www.theoi.com/image/K8.2Athena.jpg
Citation: Atsma, A. (2007). Heracles and Athena. In Ancient Greek Art. Retrieved October 20, 2009, from http://www.theoi.com/Gallery/K8.2.html
Heracles. (2009, October 18). Retrieved October 20, 2009, from http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Heracles
Friday, September 11, 2009
Tuesday, September 8, 2009
My Identity! ♥
My parents have always had my back since the day I was born. My identity and the person I am today is hugely impacted by my parents. They have given me so many opportunities and continuously shared their thoughts and wisdom with my younger sister and I. When I was younger, my mom always signed me up for different activities and gave me constant encouragement. Sometimes I needed a little boost because I was not willing to attend practices that my clubs held. At the age of three and four, I had joined the jazz & tap dancing, ice-skating and ballet club. As I grew older, I stuck to ice-skating and ballet, and my parents supported me the whole way. I was able to participate in ice-skating competitions with my team, and my parents were there to drive me all around the state. When I moved to England, I continued with my ballet, and actually went to a ballet school for five years. My parents attended every single one of my performances for extra support. Later on, my dad signed me up for private lessons in golf, and to help with my confidence, he sat through my lessons with me. All this support and the opportunities they've provided me have helped shaped me today. I am now confident in myself and do try to strive for the best. I am not afraid of failure and always try to work with my best effort. My parents have taught me how to be respectful of others, responsible (taking care of my sister), friendly (to make the best of friends) and open-minded to accept different cultures and ideas (because we move around a lot). I am a happy person with great goals and strong values, some shaped by my parents as well. One of my most important goals is to be successful in my academics. I think that when I was younger it was more my parent's goal rather than my own, maybe because I was too young to care. But even then I was able to be successful, and now that goal has become my own as well as theirs. The values that I have chosen have most definitely been influenced by the same values of my parents. They value optimism, friendliness, diversity, respect, excellence and courage. And since I have been brought up with those values, I have been accustomed to them and now I believe in those same values. I think that even as I grow older, I will always stick to those values but maybe add on a few. I am grateful of my parent's love and support and do believe that if they hadn't had my back these past fifteen years, I would lack an identity and my strong values would be missing!
Friday, September 4, 2009
English Throughout My Life! ♥
Monday, August 31, 2009
Thursday, August 27, 2009
My Literary History! ♥
Chalk and Cheese
By Adele Geras
My Sister’s Keeper
By Jodi Picoult
The Seven Habits of Highly Effective Teens
By Sean Covey
Expectations of G10 English:
Overall, I am quite excited for a whole new year of English! I like the different types of assignments we will be doing such as playwriting, poetry podcasts and commentaries. I hope to improve my writing skills especially with commentaries and articles because those were my weaknesses in the past. I want to learn more but have fun at the same time! Other than that, I’m looking forward to my English class!