Sunday, May 9, 2010
Sunday, May 2, 2010
Monday, April 19, 2010
Tuesday, March 9, 2010
Sonnet!♥
Sado, the traditional way of tea
Has been around for many centuries
It may seem simple but surely it's not
There are steps to take and the tea is hot!
The soul needs to be cleansed and purified
The mind has to be free of any thoughts
One must breath deeply and fully relax
In order to feel the serenity
Green froth forms inside the beautiful bowl
The matcha is whisked to a perfection
The fukusa is folded and replaced
While the bowl moves across the tatami
Savor the sweet and unique wagashi
Because soon after comes the bitter tea!
Friday, March 5, 2010
Tuesday, February 23, 2010
MYP Reflection: Semester 1
I am proud of what I was able to accomplish in the first semester, but there is room for improvements! There is no specific pattern to most of my grades, and therefore, they are quite inconsistent. However, there is one criterion where my grades are more consistent; Criterion C (Skills). This is the category for Document Based Questions (DBQs). Although I feel as if I struggle with drawing my own conclusions from what I see or read, I can tell, from the table above, that my strengths are in Criterion C/DBQs. This being said, I still feel like one of my main weaknesses is the inability to go in depth and fully answer a question. I am able to come up with a satisfactory answer, however, I usually miss some key ideas. Sometimes it can be difficult for me to read a passage, for example, and then be able to take key ideas and answer the "so what?" question. I am quite sure that if I focus on finding key points, connecting them, and drawing conclusions from them, my grades in Criterion A (Knowledge & Understanding) would increase. Another weakness that I have is managing my time during an assessment. I always spend too much time on the first few problems and then I run out of time for the last few. I can improve by planning out my time and setting a time limit for each question. Also, if I am more prepared before class I can balance my time better. Hopefully I can make these improvements happen in the second semester!Friday, February 19, 2010
Can You Define Love?♥
She is free, afloat, watching somebody else,
She pretends to spy her loved ones in sun-speckled cloud shapes,
She has not been asleep.
Squashed roses, in darkening shades of pink, float on the water
Your time has come, they say
Go, be brave.
She has a distinct hourglass figure,
She wears a long, lilac gown,
Her skin is white as whole milk,
Her lips are a peachy orange.
She finally closes her eyes,
Kiss me, kiss, kiss, sweetheart, she whispers.
He holds out a hand for her to grab,
Both beautiful, they meet,
She doesn’t blush, and he breaks down,
She lets him fall into the calm, glassy waters,
This is the thing called ‘love’
A story of enchantment.
Thursday, February 18, 2010
Reflectively Speaking!♥
Tuesday, February 16, 2010
Monday, February 8, 2010
My Goals for the Future!♥
Wednesday, December 16, 2009
Tuesday, December 15, 2009
My Photographic Memory!♥
Saturday, December 5, 2009
Mini Commentary!♥
What is Murakami trying to achieve with his use of language in this passage?
Friday, December 4, 2009
Wednesday, December 2, 2009
Tuesday, November 24, 2009
My Strengths and Weaknesses!♥
So far, I have written two essays in my tenth grade English class. The first one was an in-class short story literary essay and the second one was related to the themes of Antigone. In both essays I had my strengths and weaknesses, which I can hopefully improve on by the end of the school year.
Strengths: Usually when I write about a topic that interests me and that I am passionate about, I can write more and connect more with it, which, overall, makes my writing better. Overtime, I've become better at including examples in my essay to help with the reader's understanding. I feel like this has become one of my strengths. I am also quite good at coming up with lots of ideas (but that can sometimes be a problem) and I can develop them pretty well! When it comes to grammar, spelling, and punctuation, I usually do well and have no problems! Just need to pay attention to my weaknesses!
Weaknesses: One problem I've always had with my essays is including advanced and difficult vocabulary. I always use simple words and don't usually have a variety. This is one of my major weaknesses, which I really have to work on. Another significant weakness is that I'm not always able to develop my ideas in an organized and coherent way and keep one idea per paragraph. I tend to include information that sometimes doesn't relate to the topic sentence or thoughts being conveyed in the paragraph. Lastly, I do not always go into depth with my arguments and information. I think that if I really focus on those weaknesses I can definitely improve by the end of the year, and in the future, as I write more and more essays and work on different types of formal writing.


